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Maybe try out raising the vocals of the singers (other than the mom lol) cause it's kinda hard to hear them! Also, look into some scales and chord stuff, it'll help you create better melodies that mesh well together!

xdfhgrghxfg responds:

OK! :D

Nice opening theme! I'd suggest looking into scales and trying to use those, it'll help make the notes of the song feel more matched together!

CristoferGamer96 responds:

Gracias, la verdad si quiero estudiar bien la teoria musical para hacer algo que no se escuche tan chirriante y se escuche mas uniforme, de momento esto es algo como una prueba que hice en fl sin saber nada de musica ni del programa, este ost sera para un juego de broma que quiero sacar el 1 de abril XD

Ok I'll be honest, I'm right now searching the audio portal for any AI music that snuck in, I feel like this is very human made lol. This is one of the most creative songs I've ever heard, from the vocal scratching to the sudden transition to the drop, which almost sounds... 80s ish? It's such a cool change! And the sound selection here is so unique but it doesn't feel like it doesn't belong! Great job!

I like the riff! Maybe consider raising the other instruments' volumes up, or putting a compressor on the drums to make it a little softer!

EwanDog responds:

Thanks!

When the song kinda does those periodic stops, it slaps! I'd suggest in the beginning when you build up to the drop, soften those kicks or put the volume down. Or, raise the other stuff's volumes up. It kinda is a huge change in volume and exploded my ears. Good job though!

OK THIS IS SUCH A COOL SONG! I really love the ambient vibe you've gone for, this is something I would totally listen to! The mix seems a bit muddy, maybe you can eq the mids to control them a little? Keep it up, I really love your style!

Sounds very chiptuney! Only thing I can think of is possibly lowering the volume of the drums. I really love how this song feels, I can totally imagine this as a town theme song! I also do love the chiptune choice. The song's a bit quiet though, you can easily raise the volume of this without running into any clipping problems!

BlueHairedBoy13 responds:

I lowered the drum volume and they’re still loud ._.
Thx for the feedback though
Updated it at some point btw

It's cool! Maybe consider raising the volume of the strings, as it's a little quiet even though it's not the main melody. However I really love your melodies! Very pleasing to my ears, especially that part around the one minute mark!

I love the Synpluck plucks from FLEX that you're using! Look into some compression for the plucks, you can compress them all a bit and then raise the volume of the track!

MrFishyFishy responds:

Thanks! I'll certainly look into that for my next egyptian-style song.

Escaping reality with music.

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